利用者‐会話:Licatuv

About Giulio Angioni

1. For translated articles, we have a guideline for translated articles and requires that the first version of the article conform to requirements listed on the section WP:TRANS#翻訳記事の投稿の手続き. Giulio Angioni is being considered for deletion because it did not.
2. The text you posted at Wikipedia:削除依頼/Giulio Angioni has grammatical/stylistic errors. Specifically, the portion in parentheses could be "サルデーニャ島、グアジーラ生まれ". Note the inverted order of Sardinia and Guasila. Moreover, polite-form sentence teineitai and direct-form sentence futsutai are mixed in your sentence. Wikipedia uses direct-form.
3. For further consultation, you can drop me a note when you want to recreate the article after the current Vote for Deletion closes. --朝彦（会話） 2012年11月3日 (土) 12:25 (UTC)

1. I will do as you suggest. Thank yu very much.--Licatuv（会話） 2012年11月4日 (日) 11:30 (UTC)